Analyze and develop Beautyi?sWhen the dancer is the self”

This is a reflective essay based on one primary essay, adding another idea from the second essay, combining my personal experience. The primary essay is Beauty: When the dancer is the self”, and the second essay is On seeing england for the first time”. The personal experience is a period of time of my weight lost. I want you to edit my personal experience into a scene (mentioned in the requirement below.) to make it more effective.
Here is the requirement:

Writing:
Without cutting and pasting from previous writing exercises, explain the connections between your primary essay, your second essay, and your personal experience and/or cultural phenomenon. These pieces of evidence (your two written texts and personal experience or cultural phenomena) can flow in any order that seems appropriate to you. Do not worry about a beginning and end at this point. For this writing exercise, you are primarily concerned with working out connections.
You should include, where appropriate: brief summaries of your two essays (3 to 4 sentences long and making use of those key terms so that you cover the essential threads of the essay); important quotations from your essays that convey key points that interest you; textual analysis that ideally deals with form in some way. If you use personal experience as evidence, try to present a vivid scene or moment rather than a general story.
Try to convey what excites you about your primary essay and its ideas. You want to work on paragraphs and sentences that do connecting work, bringing your texts together so that they illuminate one another.
This should be 3-4 pages typed, double-spaced. Try to convey what excites you about your primary essay and its ideas. You want to work on paragraphs and sentences that do connecting work, bringing your texts together so that they illuminate one another.
This should be 3 pages typed, double-spaced.

I previously wrote some exercises for this essay, i want you to borrow the idea and refine it. To connect the three parts of the essay, you need to follow the patternSummary, analysis, thinking, personal experience, connection, and thinking”. My personal experience is too broad, but i want you to focus on something that can relate to the primary essay. ITs better to be the positive side.