Are we getting overly dependant on technology?

general 5 paragraph essay.
1introduction
aattentiongetter
bbackground information
cthesis statement(your intended argument; list your three main points)
2 body paragraph #1
atopic sentemce(major assertion-point)
bsupporting details( quotes, description, paraphraisng, explanation)
3 Body pragraph #2
a-topic sentemce(major assertion-point)
b-supporting details( quotes, description, paraphraisng, explanation)
4Body paragraph #3
a-topic sentemce(major assertion-point)
b-supporting details( quotes, description, paraphraisng, explanation)
5Conclusion
a restate thesis (rephrase main idea)
b closing thoughts ( so what? summary of main points, call to action quotation, question, reference, back to introduction, future. )
Thank you