Ave International Law Adequately Protected the Children? A Critical Examination of International Law during Humanitarian Crisis & Armed Conflict

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You need to provide 15000 words excluding bibliography and foot notes. I would need a draft by the end of this week if possible. Dissertation proposal form is attached which was submitted however, the supervisor is not satisfied with it and gave following comments.

As you have asked to me, I am sending you an email with the main remarks about your proposal. Anyway, we have discussed about everything on Thursday.

First, the most important is to clearly formulate the key question/problem of your dissertation. As I have explained to you, it is not clear what is your research question. A dissertation answer to a main/key question. You also need to explain clearly how you will define the scope of your dissertation and to justify this (please also remember our discussion about the States chosen and the legal protection/adequate protection, but also the importance of the question). Your proposal is too general, so you need to explain your theoretical framework.

Second, please make a plan answering your key question. It is important to clearly explain what you want to develop in each chapter (because as I have told you, it is not clear from your actual plan and it seams difficult not to repeat the same ideas/information). Try to explain in some lines what each chapter aims to achieve (in order to support your central argument).

Please remember that your dissertation should not be descriptive. A critical analysis of the International law (or/and domestic law) and of the situations is required. You also need to be critically engaged with the academic literature.”

On different occasions he also sent following email.

I think that we discussed this when we met and I gave you some suggestions, but I cannot formulate your key question. You have identified more issues in your proposal, so the idea is to formulate the main question and to delimit your topic.”

Can you please formulate the key question and provide a draft as a matter of urgency so i get i approved.

Ave International Law Adequately Protected the Children? A Critical Examination of International Law during Humanitarian Crisis & Armed Conflict

Assignment Criteria
Please be critical and analytical throughout the paper. In the end give your own views in the light of discussion and support your stance with the references. Kindly specifically give attention to following;
a? Your introduction should clearly signal what you are going to do a and why
a? Your conclusion should clearly summarize your main argument (and punch-line) and remind the marker what you have done
a? Your essay should be integrated as much as possible into a logical overall argument and narrative
a? Your writing style should be as clear as possible to communicate your ideas concisely
a? Avoid making rash generalizations and unsubstantiated claims