Changing nature of work and its competitive advantage

hi , i sent my proposal for editing before, i ask to change few things but my professor refused this proposal, pls try to understand this is my last submission, they annot give chance anymore, so pls consider this and what corrections u have to do i given below, pls check this and modify according to requirements pls.

1)Who are your participants and how will you recruit them? (i.e. how you collect your primary data, what is your research method?)

2)How will you analyse your quantitative data?

3)Using Accenture as a case study, will you have access to the right level of data for this? It seems rather ambitious. Please explain in detail