College writing, Steroid and society: A Discussion and Analysis final draft

This is the final draft of my paper. Length: 8 12 pages, not including references or APA title page, but dont focus on page count. Write and then see how long it is. You might surprise yourself.br /
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after the rough draft, i need write a final draft paper. and the topic does not change, still is Steroid and society: A Discussion and Analysis. And here is some tips from my advirsor: 1. before making general statement like this, tell a short story thats been in the news about steroid use. Armstrong, Schwarzenegger and some famoues atletes. But be sure to find a news aritcle and cite the source, or find something in one of the source you are already using. then you can move on to the more gengral statement that this inst uncommon. 2. rather than drawing attention to the paper itself, introduce your thesis statement with something like,by examining these two factors as they relate to steroid use, it may be possible to better understand what the effects of steroid use…3. some further pages could be generated( along with reader interest) by including more stories of particular people who were caught in steroid use. for this section, finding someone who suffered backlash from sports fans and society in general would strongly support everything else said here. br /
also citations are required when talke about the side effect of steroid. br /
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this is my final paper of college wirting class this semster, please do it as best as you can. Thnak you!br /
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and rough draft and grading rubric is here: p1MXpsM5sPu%2B8qBJnmmuiw