Commercial and procurement: selection of suppliers

this paper was done here previously and I failed it, it needs some changes that the prof. wrote in the paper that I will upload, the paper name is (commercial and procurement)
and hes additional comments are:
I have scanned the document and made comments on first part and up to project 1. See comments on the a?critiquea?.

The report is still poor demonstrating weakness in understanding the main topic.

See the academic success unit as the English is weak.

also i will add to this an A student paper in the same course,

please contact me for any questions as I need this urgently and really cant afford failing and do what ever changes you find suitable even if you want to change the projects used to analysis.