Comparative study on Korean diaspora communities in Britain and the United States: process of community building and notion of homeland

This is a draft research proposal for the dphil application. I see a lot of repetition and redundancy but I have so many other essays to write and think about, so I would like some outside help in the meantime to refine the writing and work on it again. I omitted the funding part and the bibliography as I dont think I need editing in that part.

Thank you very much.