Eath Penalty Is The Other Form of Murder

Hello

I want you to do some editing in the essay attached

Remove the headlines from the essay and make a connection in the body and revise the thesis statement to make it clearer and direct to the points and correct the punctuation and the grammar and increase the number of the words and
no outline or headlines needed only MLA regular essay and just connect the points to each other

No source needed at all and the words limit is 750 words