Five-page analysis of short story–The Yellow Wall-Paper.

I have edited this paper based on the instructors comments to my best ability and knowledge. I would like it to be edited one step further to achieve the following goals:

1) closer to a Masters level paper.
2) closer to YOUR writings (the past two gothic novels).
3) further general editing.

I will submit the 1) original paper with the comments, 2) edited paper, 3) the scanned short story, by tomorrow night.

Thank You.