General suggestions: pragmatism, pluralism, american religion & the labor movement, religion and the media

i need help for a thesis statement and the content of the paper itself…can you assist me on my dilemma?
this is a thesis paper for my dissertation…

i need to submit my second paper for my masters subject: american religious experience…2 papers are required and my first paper was already submitted which was my very first order and it was rush…my graded first paper came back with a Bgrade as there was no argument at all and too much focus on different subjects…anyhow the next 2 write-ups i got from your service was really well done as they were oral presentation with powerpoint and an overview write-up…this 2nd and last paper is s id like to really make good to make up on my Bgrade first paper…i need help as to what thesis statement id make with arguments and convince the professor in my paper…am so burnout with ideas that i cannot focus and i need help as to the thesis statement…

we only have one primary source which is by author martin e. marty Pilgrims in their own land: 500 years of religion in america (new york: penguin, 1984) ISBN 0-1400-8268-9 and at least 4 secondary sources the writer can have his choice(s)…my history subject on american religious experience is designed to provide a survey of american religion from thepuritans to the pentecostals that explores the historical traditions, contemporary experiences and popular spirituality of diverse religious communities…largely focusing on christianity inamerica, we will examine the ever so complex religious pluralism of the american landscape through the use of different media and cultural viewpoints…this course has 4 goals: 1) to introudce us to the lives and contributions of several american religious pioneers, 2) explore religious inheritances brought from various countries and their developments alongside each other, 3) investigate some of the theological and social questions they face,, 4) critically analyze the primary sources concerning them…
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[luz larrazabal] this course requires a 7 page paper focused on primary source from the 18th century to the present…topics may include the importance of a recurring image through several texts, the terms and concepts that an author uses, the rhetorical structure of an authors argument, or the authors relationship with other ecclecistical or political figures, etc…the professor doesnt want us to content ourselves with the opinions of others…she wants us to focus on constructing an argument and then prove our point through logical steps…in addition, we need to demonstrate some consideration of the works context (including the authors curcumstances and purpose for writing, the genre or type of literary creation with which we are dealing, and the audience the author intended to reach…

the professor gave us these elements for us to keep in mind when writing the paper…thesis…argument not description…historical context who, what when, where, why, how…balance more than half of our paper needs to be devoted to the argument, not introduction or background material…we need need to quote primary source but make sure to incorporate them into the argument…footnotes a) not parenthetical; b) dont need to footnote every sentence if something is general knowledge, dont footnote…secondary sources at least 4, encyclopedia articles (while helpful to understand an individual author or topic) dont count; check out ATLA, JTOR database, etc…Wikipedia not acceptable for masters level…