How banning smoking can affect an individual or customer at workplace

Hello, my professor sent back my paper with editing needed to be done. All areas marked in GREEN are what need to be fixed, and she explains what needs to be done. Again, you have to follow the text and related the paper to examples FROM THE BOOK. She also tells you what page number to related to as well. Please fix/edit all areas marked in green and send back, again dont forget to match it with the book.
I ALSO NEED THIS DONE WITHIN 6 HOURS PLEASE, IT DIDNT GIVE ME THE OPTION UNDER URGENCY”
Book:
Title: Excellence in Business Communications, TENTH edition. Prentice-Hall
Author: John V. Thill and Courtland L. BovA©e