Ifferences between NHS Foundation trusts and NHS trusts

This is Negotiated Study (work based projects) ( First year or level 4)
The essay should be 2500 words + 750 words annotated bibliography

* English is not my native language ( It is third language that I speak) so it is very important that the essay is written in simple or if I may say plane English.
Please find attached essay which I wrote in the beginning of this academic year, this is the first essay I did in English. It was marked 58 but I would like this essay to be somewhere around 65.

I am employed by NHS Foundation Trust as Elective waiting list manager so this essay should, perhaps, be more about Foundation trusts and patient pathways within it or maybe about financial structure.

I am not sure if you will be able to open this page or not but it explains what the essay should be like view.php?id155826. Please let me know if you are unable to open this page.

This is the first and hopefully last time I had to get someone else to do studying for me so I am extremely worried that my tutor will spot difference between my essay and your one.
Do not hesitate to contact me if you will need more information.

Kindest Regards,