Inancial Performance of Bristol-Myers Squibb

Already have some very good sub-topics in the paper (for example the risk management) however the flow of that first section needs a bit of work. I believe this can be fixed by moving some sections around.
Editing and proofreading the grammars.
I will attach my paper. I preferred my old writer rework for me(I had an old order same as this topic in my order list)