Irect adbisors role toward international students.

Please write in a simple and basic language, i will upload my revised draft for the assignment that i need to edit and please make the paper with this order:

The thesis could be:
The University should assign direct advisors to international students because (the reasons)
and please dont forget to write in a simple language and basic vocal cause Im an international student. read the paper in order to illustrate your over knowledge about the the subject and thanks a lot for your consideration.

Added on 24.04.2015 21:48
The revised draft is attached with this message.