Iscuss the economic and political siginificance of Macdonalds National Policytariff. (source: Destinies Ch.3)

The essay has already been written by one of your writers online; however i got a really bad mark on it. I was wondering if you can assign me to other writer that can correct and add a strong theses to it.

Please make all necessary corrections to this attached essay, you would probably have to write less than 1 page.
1) Rewrite a strong thesis
2) The body needs to be corrected and more detailed, like what where and how. MORE DETAILS ABOUT THE TARIFF
3) Talk more about the tariff and not the history
4) Rewrite the conclusion to be stronger.