Issertation: Singing Popular music Vocal Expression through Emotion and Physical Movements

Could you please edit it? I have problems about english grammar and expression. I need to re write it but please do not cut off the main idea and theories, especially the quotations and please comment the quotations that I cited or show the argument with this topic, you can add more detail if you have. I really need it on time because I have to hand it this Friday. It is my deadline. One thing, Dont worry about 60 references that I wrote, I have all references already, but you can add it if you would like to add more and please give me the references.

Thank you so much for your help.