Lement of E-tailing development in Hong Kong

i have complete the dissertation , how ever it have been fialed , there is my failed dissertation and my tutor comment , please re write the whole dissertation what you can re use the dissertation are those ref or chart , but the other must be rewrite

related more to Supply chain management. the course is from UK, cannot copy other peoples dissertation.

* Abstract: no less than 200 words and no more than 300 words
* Body of Work: req
* Body of Work: requires a conclusion not recommendations.
* Body of the dissertation should be in Front size 12