Linical autonomical imaging study of Fatigue n Parkinsons disease

Hi

Iam writing an introduction chapter ( as a part of my thesis ,my project is Clinical autonomical imaging study of Fatigue n Parkinsons disease )

I have gathered some information from different sources ( i have copied some bits as such )

I want to know whether you are happy to edit my introduction and make it better before i show it to my supervisors including refernces )

If so i will forward you my work

Thank you