Merging brands moving in to Developed markets


I have finish writing the essay on International Marketing myself(as per the reference link here: Ld09Om)

Anyway, the essay is failed, and I have to resubmit with the additional approximately 750 words, and the teacher have already provided the comments as per below note, which I need your help on this.

Teacher comments: In this essay have to identified the attraction of Emerging brands moving in to Developed markets, neither have you considered the challenges of the developed markets, apart from daying the sponsorship is expensive. You have some relevant references, but not enough of Emerging brands going to developed markets and you are not referencing thoroughly in the text. You must at least include some indication of the attraction of developed markets and highlight some of the challenges in order to pass”.