Nalysis and Evaluation of Written Texts

I want that you help me to complete the task. There is the web article and you need to read and answer on 5 questions in as much detail In own wordsIve got my example with lecturer corrections which I also can provide.

Added on 17.12.2014 13:34
Here I attached files “1,2,3,4,5These files is an article with Task textand 5 questions on which you need to answer. Also I attached my version of the work with lecturer comments but my work is not correct, but anyway maybe it will help you to understand the task more.

Regards, Deniss

Nalysis and Evaluation of Written Texts

Need to fix some questions.

Added on 12.01.2015 06:58
Here I attached file, I received it from tutor with corrections, I want that you help me to solve them… I will attach as well photos with a task. I want to fix parts of job where tutor asks for

Added on 12.01.2015 07:01
1,2,3,4,5.jpg is the task. and the file where you need to fix corrections.