Nalysis of child-adult language interaction

The first two pages are just the instructions about the essay. I need the essay to be edited according the instructions. If it is possible to fix the conclusion according to the instructions including the first two pages.I am not sure if Ive done this part right,( Early Years Learning Framework Learning Outcomes; (the Early Years Learning Framework learning outcomes the child is working towards)if you find it does not look right, please edit it according the instructions: The referencing should be APA. If you have any question, please send me an email immediately. If you need the transcript of my conversation with child, let me know.
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