Nalysis of Drug Penetration through Avascular Tissue

IMPORTANT: This piece of work needs to go to a pHD student researching cancer.


1: My tutors have marked the original disseration and made comments to increase my marks. I have made ammendments already to disseration this is saved as first draft.

2: In the introduction as per my tutors comments could you could you add in the justification of 3T3 cells, the significance of pHs and the effects of PH on Doxorubicin this should be four pages long.

3: I have re-written the results and methods again. I have averaged the results in individually as per advice from my tutor. I have taken each of the factors and taken a mean average of the results and graphed them and completely re-written the method section. However Each set of results need a description, similar to the descriptions in the journal:

Evaluation of a novel in vitro assay for assessing drug penetration into avascular regions of tumours.


4: As the results have changed, so will has discussion, this will be different and therefore this has to re-written. Please read through:  Evaluation of a novel in vitro assay for assessing drug penetration into avascular regions of tumours as guidance for writing the discussion. The result description and discussion should be written in this format. Clarity has to been given on why why the results have significance.

5: Re-write the abstract in conjuguction with the rest of the work

6: Please made ammendements as per my tutors comments

7: And finally could you please change style of the format of the dissertation making it look more presentable i.e. graphs in boxes, look at the example of the first class dissertation and it presentation style.

8: Cross reference the references

Here is the link for my work:
Harvard