Ngage Gladwell, Olson, and Nathan in a conversation to explain how individuals

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Ngage Gladwell, Olson, and Nathan in a conversation to explain how individuals

Malcolm Gladwell emphasizes the crucial role that a?personal connection,a? played in promoting the civil rights movement against racism in the American society. However, Steve Olson argues that while the strong connection through intermarriages in Hawaii eased the racial tension, it did not eliminate personal biases, individualism, and Stereotypes, which cause what Rebekah Nathan describes as a?the fragmentation of the whole,a? Hawaiian society.
Engage Gladwell, Olson, and Nathan in a conversation to explain how individuals
can build strong relationships and develop open-mindedness to promote cultural
appreciation toward individuals from different ethnic backgrounds?

Here are some questions to help you develop your original ideas that answer the prompt:
1. How can the elimination of stereotypes help individuals to build stronger relationships?
2. How can appreciation and acceptance of different cultures help individuals to promote diversity in their relationships?
3. How can a?the fragmentation of the wholea? among ethnic based groups be eased in multicultural communities and societies?
4. What is the role of social media in promoting diversity and cultural appreciation among individuals who have different ethnicities?
5. What is the role of intermarriage in promoting cultural appreciation?
6. What is the role of living in a multicultural society in promoting diversity and open-mindedness?