Ngineering reasearch skills: A Managerial Plan as a Solution to the Chronic Water Shortage

it is an editing for the order (618924)
I found too much reliance on the wordings of others! And I would like it to have more of the writers pont of view and much less quoting from resourses, please. I am attaching four scans for the errors found to make it easier to edit. I am also attaching the original paper Docx. format for better view. Too much quoting loses the writers identity and could give the paper a D-!