Nglish compositionrepost (Persuasive Essay collaboration and peer review)

Respond with positive feedback to what this student has posted on this subject. Answer only needs to be one short paragraph. Brittni post: I think the hardest part of writing a persuasive essay is figuring which details that support your side of the topic to put into the essay. I usually seem to find so much information that I have a hard time deciding what to put into my essay. I want to put the best information from my research that will make the reader want to agree with my side of the argument or at least I will prove my point. I also think that forming a conclusion is an area where I struggle with. I have a hard time wrapping things up and making sense out of what the reader just read.
We were to comment on what challenges we might encounter when building a working draft of a persuasive essay.

Nglish compositionrepost (Persuasive Essay collaboration and peer review)

Respond with positive feedback to what this student has posted on this subject. Answer only needs to be one short paragraph. Theresa post: Ill completely honest, this is going to be a tuff paper to wrote. I dont have a wide array of vocabulary. I an also struggling with my research. My thesis is strong, though I feel as if my conclusion and introduction are lacking. So my challenges are all of the above. I refuse to give up so I look at this paper as a new hurtle that I must jump; hopefully with out stumbling over.
We were to comment on what challenges we might encounter when building a working draft of a persuasive essay.