Oaches Attitiudes Toward Sport Psychology Consultation

A couple of my committee members say that I need much work in the editing department. My flow isnt there and most sentences are flawed. Please help!!! Im not sure if themes are adequately supported or if I make sense. I will be e-mailing the criteria for evaluation for both chapters (introduction and methodology). I also attached the prospectus one of my committee members sent back to me with some edits. She said she just corrected a few thing on the first few pages, but that much needed to be done. The official paper is PROSPECTUSDeannaJNelson. Thanks so much! Unfortunately, I need it in a week for my conference call