Oes the East Asian miracle prove mercantilism or liberalism right? (International Political Economy)

Dear writer
I had a billing problem.
I think you already have my edited essay.
I have not enough time.
And this essay is really really important for me.
thank you.

It need to be resized to 3400-500 words(max.3500)
My tutor said,
Essay is NOT about brief history, NOT a summary
Should be ANALYTICAL!
-Answer the question!! Point
-with Strong conclusion!!
-Introduction, Opening!!! important
-All claims have to be backed up!!
-Simple statistics would be OK
But Im struggling(please see strengths and weaknesses)

*If you can, I want to use my current researches.(Ive spent really much time on that. but its up to you)
And U.K. english is preferred.
Thank you.
This essay is really really important for me in my life.
This is my last resort.
No plagiarism…never.. please…thanx
Strengths & Weaknesses: My essay need to be resized to 3400-3500 words. and,
fix inconsistency
restructuring
correct weak argument
make clear overlapped contents
correct grammars
references(harvard style)
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