Oleman as a Lens for Pars of the Mooney Book
Please note how specific the writer is in suing Coleman as a lens to understand the Mooney chapter he focused on more fully/richer/differently. Thats the crucial part you need to work on in tis essay.
SPECIFY SPECIFIC COLEMAN IDEAS AS THEY RELATE TO MOONEY. INTEGRATION OF QUOTES AND OR PARAPHRASES FROM THE TEXTS AND STRONG AND THOUGHTFUL EXPLORATION OF THOSE IDEAS.
ESSAY IS DRIVEN BY QUOTATIONS, NOT JUST BY A THESIS YOU ARE PROVING