Ome schooling and its negative impact on children
thesis: home schooling causes a disconnection between kids and their community, negatively affecting the social and communication skills of the kids.
point 1: community around the kids
point 2: social skills
point 3: communication with people would be one of the difficulties
needed by May 2nd
you could switch around the thesis and my main points, due to the similarities between pt 2 and 3.