Ommercial Sexual Exploitation of Children

Please revise my paper. My teacher posted comments mainly on the abstract and one or two comments on the literature review that will need to have references. She also wants the paper to have headings and sub headings in APA format. This paper was ordered from your website with APA guidelines chosen.
Please include one page explaining a personal immersion into the CSEC world while attending an empowerment conference for foster youth who have been exploited. The page should go into detail about what you heard, what you seen, how you interacted with the girls (Im a social worker volunteer at the conference) this paper should begin on page 11. I have to change the attending the rise above conference to past tense.