Ommunication and Scholarship final essay

Hello my friend i am Dany
I hope you are in good heath condition
If you remember the topic (Communication and Scholarship)
You did essay plan which is good i got good mark thanks
Now i want you please write whole essay following the plan and feedback for teacher she gave suggestions
It will be 1500 word however, you have done introduction and first paragraph which is 400 now
I will attach to you plan and teacher feedback to complete essay
Thank you