Ommunication ProjectI AM SAM-Rough Draft

I have attached the first writing and the outline. Suggestion for writing an effective introduction to a movie analysis: Open with a dramatic scene from the movie. Include concrete details and even dialogue as devices to captivate your reader. Keep your introduction concise, or you will lose your focus. Near the end of your dramatic introduction, move into a transition sentence or two that connects your opening scene to your revised thesis. A transition might say, This scene from the film dramatizes better that anything else how characters show xyz element of communication.These words take you into your thesis-as your thesis conveys your main, driving idea about your chosen topic.