Ommunication skills (commantary on interview)

This is a reflective piece from the interview that was recorded the other day. I have been asked to do a commentary on what I feel went well and not so well. I have written it but I would like you to look through this and check its correct if you need to correct anything please do so the word count is 1000 words which are over on here. This is all relating to Social work practice in which I have tried to do so.I can write in the first person (I) as this is a reflective piece. Please note that I feel the conclusion needs looking at (Harvard ref please)