Ompare Brideshead Revisited and As you like it by Shakespeare.

Based on the given essay, with green marks, develop a 6 pages comparative essay.Make sure you fix all the problems marked by green pens.

Compare Brideshead Revisited and As you like it by Shakespeare.
Develop and underline the SPECIFIC THESIS STATEMENT TO COMPARE THESE TWO BOOKS.
Develop a specific headline for this essay.
Try to be as specific as possible, avoid using some adjectives such as interesting, great or different.. Use complete sentences, not sentence fragments, throughout the proposal.

Assignment goals: The purpose of this assignment is to exercise your ability to compare two disparate texts meaningfully and without engaging in mere plot summary by first choosing a sound basis for comparison. You will decide how to focus your analysis and explain what significance there is to the similarities and/or differences between the two narratives. Your first task is to find a common theme as basis upon which to compare the two works and then examine ways in which that theme is played out similarly and differently in each text.
Instructions: Devise a comparative topic of your own choosing.

Whether you are emphasizing similarities or differences or both depends on your particular interpretation.

yii?? 0.5 Instructions: Devise a comparative topic of your own choosing. Whether you are emphasizing similarities or differences or both depends on your particular interpretation.
1. The first paragraph should describe your topic and include the working thesis; the thesis should be underlined.
2. The second paragraph should contain whatever you imagine should follow the opening paragraph. (The purpose of this part of the proposal is to give you something to start with when you draft out the essay so you arenyii?? 0.5 t staring at a blank screen.)
3. The rest of the proposal may consist of an outline of the subsequent paragraphs of the essay draft, using the numbering function like bullet points for each paragraph you have in mind. Or you may write a yii?? 0.5 mini-draftyii?? 0.5 of your paper in full paragraphs; whatever works best for you.
o Keep in mind for this assignment that your goal is to summarize and arrange the building blocks of your analysis as you imagine them at this stage of the writing process. Your goal is not to include every single idea that comes to mind for your topic.
o You may well have more paragraphs in mind than can be outlined within the length limit of this assignment. Therefore, your proposal should consist of those paragraphs you are most sure of
Include evidence from the text in your proposal. If you donyii?? 0.5 t want to quote, please provide context for the scene you are writing about. Remember, if you are torn between quoting and summarizing, ALWAYS QUOTE. Be prepared to explain the significance of the quotes you include, however!

Added on 28.04.2015 07:50
Have you received the attached file, that is what you wrote last time, please fix the problems.

Ompare Brideshead Revisited and As you like it by Shakespeare.

Based on the given essay, with green marks, develop a 6 pages comparative essay.Make sure you fix all the problems marked by green pens.

Compare Brideshead Revisited and As you like it by Shakespeare.
Develop and underline the SPECIFIC THESIS STATEMENT TO COMPARE THESE TWO BOOKS.
Develop a specific headline for this essay.
Try to be as specific as possible, avoid using some adjectives such as interesting, great or different.. Use complete sentences, not sentence fragments, throughout the proposal.

Assignment goals: The purpose of this assignment is to exercise your ability to compare two disparate texts meaningfully and without engaging in mere plot summary by first choosing a sound basis for comparison. You will decide how to focus your analysis and explain what significance there is to the similarities and/or differences between the two narratives. Your first task is to find a common theme as basis upon which to compare the two works and then examine ways in which that theme is played out similarly and differently in each text.
Instructions: Devise a comparative topic of your own choosing.

Whether you are emphasizing similarities or differences or both depends on your particular interpretation.

yii?? 0.5 Instructions: Devise a comparative topic of your own choosing. Whether you are emphasizing similarities or differences or both depends on your particular interpretation.
1. The first paragraph should describe your topic and include the working thesis; the thesis should be underlined.
2. The second paragraph should contain whatever you imagine should follow the opening paragraph. (The purpose of this part of the proposal is to give you something to start with when you draft out the essay so you arenyii?? 0.5 t staring at a blank screen.)
3. The rest of the proposal may consist of an outline of the subsequent paragraphs of the essay draft, using the numbering function like bullet points for each paragraph you have in mind. Or you may write a yii?? 0.5 mini-draftyii?? 0.5 of your paper in full paragraphs; whatever works best for you.
o Keep in mind for this assignment that your goal is to summarize and arrange the building blocks of your analysis as you imagine them at this stage of the writing process. Your goal is not to include every single idea that comes to mind for your topic.
o You may well have more paragraphs in mind than can be outlined within the length limit of this assignment. Therefore, your proposal should consist of those paragraphs you are most sure of
Include evidence from the text in your proposal. If you donyii?? 0.5 t want to quote, please provide context for the scene you are writing about. Remember, if you are torn between quoting and summarizing, ALWAYS QUOTE. Be prepared to explain the significance of the quotes you include, however!

Added on 29.04.2015 09:26
Here are 2page paper with green marks