Ontemporary vs. traditional of architecture design

My Outline:

Thesis: Contemporary of architecture design is more and more popular than traditional architecture design, and acceptable by people.

Topic: Contemporary vs. traditional of architecture design

Paragraph 1: Introduce the history that how is the traditional architecture more and more fade from peopleas memory because of the developing of the contemporary architecture design. Bring the thesis in which is (nowadays. Contemporary of architecture design is more and more popular than traditional architecture design, and acceptable by people.)

Paragraph 2: what is contemporary architecture design, and what type of design is contemporary design, and what is traditional architecture design, and what type of design is traditional architecture design.

Paragraph 3: Introduce some famous person in contemporary of architecture design. Like the people influence the develop of contemporary of architecture design. (Such as Frank Lloyd wright, Frank Gehry, Leoh Ming Pei). And introduce some famous person in traditional architecture design, and they should be memories by people because of them work.

Paragraph 4: Talk about residential architecture design, and talk about commercial architecture design. Talk about the characteristics both those two in contemporary and traditional, and the differences. Also especially Church is a really interest architecture to talk about. (such as St. peter is a really traditional church, and the church build by Oscar Niemeyer is really modern).

Paragraph 5: Reverse side to talk about some people still think traditional architecture design is the best and contemporary architecture design is unacceptable or unrelated with culture. Talks about why and talks about what kind of people are them.

Paragraph 6: Along with the society progress, objectively talk about which type of architecture will be more acceptable, which type of architecture will be more adjust peopleas need. (Such as contemporary will be have more modern elements in it, more technology in it, and more humanized. It will be more saving space and saving energy, most important part it will give people more inspiration to design more things which is good for people, kind of motivate societys progress. But for the traditional architecture, it could have some in the city or somewhere for visit, for some special feature for people to use, such as church or museum. But not a mainstream thing.

Paragraph 7: summarize, we canat ignore the traditional design, because it related with the culture, and symbolized the history of a country. But on the other hand we need to say that contemporary design will be more acceptable by people, because itas characteristics and its advantages.

Some Important things
1,The publisher of the source should have credential on the specific area. Minimum 6 sources, not all of them from internet, it should have some from books.

Feel free to rearrange the paper. like this.
Outline
I. Intro: (Background, definition, story, thesis)
A. Topic
B. Purpose
II. Body:
A. First Point(prove your thesis and list all the evidence)
1. Point thesis + discuss (referential, content)
2. Author credential
3. Support + Method
B. Second Point (prove your thesis and list all the evidence)
1. Point thesis + discuss (referential, content)
2. Author credential
3. Support + Method
C. Refute the Opposite Points (the section dealing with the opposition to your thesis–explaining their points and refuting them)
1. Point thesis + discuss (referential, content)
2. Author credential
3. Support + Method
III. Conclusion:

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