Ontinuity and Change of Scribal Education

Dear Sir/Madam, I would like to order a 4000-word master essay on the History of Ancient Near East. The subject is the comparison between Scribal education in Old and Neo-Babylonian period. I have already written a draft about it. However it is necessary to add several paragraphs about the social and political history in Mesopotamia in 1st millenium BC (in order to understand the changes of scribal education). I attach my draft and I can send a link with a relevant bibliography. I also need some corrections in my style. Thank you.