Ontroversial analysis about the consumption of luxury brand

because my essay requirements is 1500 words, but I already over 1900 words, please cut some not strong points, and add more explanation after each sources. My teacher really like ask Why and how”. and please edit my thesis.. my teacher ask me to write why people should pay attention on this topic and what contribution of my essay. I will upload teachers requirements, my essay, and example essays later.