Orum 5 and providing with suggestions for their papers to your peers.

you have already finish my essay 1. the order number is 1123513 , in this work Forum/Topic Post #5: For your original forum/topic #5, post your 1-2sentence tentative thesis for Essay #1. For your responses to 2 of your peers, write a detailed paragraph providing them with suggestions for their papers (how might they narrow their thesis statements, what examples might they consider using, what are your general ideas about their thesis statements?, etc.).