Ow can high schools better educate students imaginations?

ENC 1101 Prof. Hofer
Essay 5 600 Words

Your essay should answer this question:

How can high schools better educate studentsi?? imaginations?

Keep style formal by avoiding second-person pronouns, contractions, slang, and other colloquial elements, and by revising the essay thoroughly. Good control of mechanical matters will enrich your essayi??s value, as will specific content: definitions, examples, and words that refer to things experienced by the senses. Reinforce specificity by using concrete nouns and action verbs, and by eliminating unnecessary modifiers and other wordy forms. (Write i??impressed,i?? not i??greatly influencedi??; reduce i??on a weekly basisi?? to i??weekly.i??)
To organize your essay, let paragraph 1 identify a problem and end with a solution (your thesis). In paragraph 2, and maybe 3, detail the solution and its advantages. Let the next paragraph anticipate and refute opposition, and let the final paragraph take a step past your main idea: If that idea is i??Studying a foreign language (or learning to play a musical instrument, or learning to garden) will enrich studentsi?? imaginations,i?? your conclusion might add i??Students who study a second language will likely become more tolerant of cultural diversityi??; or i??By learning to play a musical instrument, students will discover the value of diligent practicei??; or i??Students who know how to grow vegetables may learn the importance of thrift.i??
Write for intelligent, interested adults, and join freshness with common sense as you imagine your content. Proof and correct carefully.

Added on 02.04.2015 00:39
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