Ow can we make the roads safer for those who share the road with bicyclists?”

The focusing question I have recorded is How can we make the roads safer for those who share the road with bicyclists?”
I dont necessarily need to see the focusing question in the paper, but I absolutely need to see the thesis claim (which answers that question) in the introduction paragraph. Look back to the Lecture in Unit 7 for a review about how the question will lead you to the thesis.