Ow Do Asian Cultural Beliefs Negatively Affect their Response to Healthcare?

Hello,

This is a continuation of what we were working on last week. When I say SCUDDY body paragraph, please see below what I mean by that:

S Synthesized a  using at least two sources to support the topic of the BP
C Cited a  sources used must be attributed in academic format.
C Coherent a  the discussion in the BP must be easy to follow for your reader. This involves using transitions.
U Unified a  this is important. The BP must focus on one theme or idea that supports the research question. Using a topic sentence [TS] is key to a unified BP
D Developed a  the BP must have enough details to fulfill the TS statement.

Please see below a paragraph I submitted and the Professors response in CAPS:

Providing quality healthcare to the Asian population is a challenge to the healthcare professionals because of cultural barriers. In order to provide quality healthcare, professionals should be able to identify the healthcare requirements of the Asian population and the factors that could hinder successful treatment. According to Uba (1992) cultural attitudes and beliefs hamper Southeast Asian patients from seeking health services. Southeast Asians are often reluctant to get healthcare because a?of their cultural attitudes about the nature of life and the inevitability of sufferinga? (Uba, 1992). Similarly according to Jin, Slomka & Bixen (2002), a?hepatitis B is more common in Asians than in the general U.S. population.a? Jin, Slomka & Bixen (2002) claim that openness and willingness to respond to patientsa issues in consideration of their culture are the keys to successful patient care. As such, health professionals must be well informed of issues concerning the Asian population.

THIS IS NOT SCCUDy BP BECAUSE IT BEGINS WITH A TOPIC SENTENCE WHICH IS NOT SPECIFICALLY FOCUSING ON A THEME BUT IS RESTATING THE OVERALL QUESTION OF YOUR PAPER -YOU NEEDED TO FIND SOMETHING QUITE SPECIFIC TO FORM A FOCUSED UNIFIED AND SYNTHESIZED BP THAT WOULD GO INTO YOUR OVERALL PAPER. SO, WHAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN IS MORE LIKE AN INTRODCUTION AND NOT A BP.

THE FOLLOWING ARE SOME OF THE THEMES THAT YOU COULD DEVELOP EITHER IN A BP OR IN A SECTION OF YOUR PAPER:
DESCRIPTION OF SPECIFIC ASIAN CULTURAL TRAITS THAT WOULD AFFECT EFFECTIVE HEALTH CARE COMMUNICATION -THIS MIGHT BE A SECTION OF YOUR PAPER
HOW DO CULTURAL BELIEFS STOP PEOPLE FROM EVEN SEEKING WESTERN STYLE HEALTH CARE?
WHICH SPECIFIC DISEASES ARE PARTICULARLY DIFFICULT TO TREAT IN ASIAN COUNTRIES DUE TO CULTURAL BELIEFS
WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT THIS -SOLUTION ONE MORE INFORMED HEALTH CARE PROVIDERS REGARDING THIS PROBLEM

This order requirements:

Following the above mentioned comments, Please write TWO SCUDDY Body Paragraphs.

Also see comments on APA Bibliography and fix accordingly:

References
Jin, X., Slomka, J. & Bixen, C. (2002). Cultural and clinical issues in the care of Asian patients. Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine, 69(1); 50-61.
Ludwick, R. & Silva, M.C. (2000) Ethics: nursing around the world: cultural values and
ethical conflicts. Online Journal of Issues in Nursing. Retrieved from
aspx IS THIS IS A JOURNAL THAT IS ONLY ONLINE -YOU NEED TO DEAL WITH IT DIFFERENTLY
Ngo-Metzer, Massagli, Clarridge, Manocchin, Davis, Lezzani & Phillips. (2003). Linguistic and cultural barriers to care. Journal of General Internal Medicine. Vol.18: 44-52. DO NOT USE VOL
Nguyen, G.T., & Bowman, M.A. (2007). Culture, language, and health literacy: Communicating about health with Asians and Pacific Islanders. Family Medicine, 39(3), 208-210. Retrieved from pdf PRINT OR ONLY ONLINE JOURNAL?
Uba, L. (1992). Cultural barriers to healthcare for southeast Asian refugees. Cultural Public Health Reports, 107(5): 544a 548. DID YOU GET THIS ONLINE OR DIRECTLY FROM THE PRINTED JOURNAL?

Ow Do Asian Cultural Beliefs Negatively Affect their Response to Healthcare?

The final paper will be a 8 page research paper but we are not there yet. I am breaking this down in parts as assigned by my professor. The final paper is due in December.

I submitted a proposal for the organization of this paper. Please see it below and note the Professors comments and suggestions in CAPS.

The main question this research paper will ask is, a?How Do Asian Cultural Beliefs Negatively Affect their Response to Healthcare?a? To support this research topic/question, the following sub-questions will be considered:
1. What are common Asian beliefs that serve as barriers to healthcare? GOOD
2. How do they impact healthcare? BE CAREFUL ABOUT OVERLAPING THE FIRST TWO SECTIONS WITH THE SAME DISCUSSION
3. What are indicators (e.g., language, gestures, etc.) of refusal to healthcare? THIS WOULD GO INTO FIRST SECTION YES?
4. How do healthcare providers deal with the barriers? THIS MIGHT GO IN A SECTION ON HEALTHCARE WORKDERS INABILITY TO HANDLE THESE CULTURAL ATTUTIDUES AND WHAT THEY SHOULD DO
5. What actions are effective in dealing with the barriers? SOLUTIONS IS GOOD SECTION
6. How do the patients respond to the solutions? PUT ALL SOLUTIONS INTO ONE SECTION
NEED TO HAVE ONLY THREE SECTIONS -NOT SIX -
To answer these questions, articles from journals such as, Cleveland Clinic Journal of Medicine andThe Online Journal of Issues in Nursing will be used. This research will benefit from library research to address the abovementioned issues. Books and peer-reviewed articles from medical and social work journals will bring light to the issues. Considering the broadness of the topic, the study will look into medical journals to find out earlier studies conducted in the field. GOOD
Presently, the organization of the paper is not finalized, but the paper might begin by stating what the cultural barriers are and what are the indicators of refusal to healthcare. Secondly, the paper will discuss the impacts of the cultural barriers then, it will discuss how healthcare providers deal with the barriers. Thirdly, the paper will attempt to show what actions are effective in dealing with the barriers and how patients respond to the solutions. This will allow the reader to have a true understanding of how cultural beliefs serve as a barrier when it comes to healthcare and how the issue is dealt with. THIS LOOKS LIKE A GOOD WAY TO ORGANIZE THE PARTS OF YOUR PAPER


THE FOLLOWING ARE SOME OF THE THEMES THAT YOU COULD DEVELOP EITHER IN A BP OR IN A SECTION OF YOUR PAPER:

a? DESCRIPTION OF SPECIFIC ASIAN CULTURAL TRAITS THAT WOULD AFFECT EFFECTIVE HEALTH CARE COMMUNICATION -THIS MIGHT BE A SECTION OF YOUR PAPER
a?
a? HOW DO CULTURAL BELIEFS STOP PEOPLE FROM EVEN SEEKKING WESTERN STYLE HEALTH CARE?
a?
a? WHICH SPECIFIC DISEASES ARE PARTICULARLY DIFFICULT TO TREAT IN ASIAN COUNTRIES DUE TO CULTURAL BELIEFS
a? WHAT CAN BE DONE ABOUT THIS -SOLUTION ONE MORE INFORMED HEALTH CARE PROVIDERS REGARDING THIS PROBLEM


REQUIREMENT OF THIS ASSIGNMENT:

Based on the above proposal and comments, I need an outline according to the template below:

Main Research Question How do Asian Cultural Beliefs Affect Their Response to Healthcare?
I. First Sub Question a Section Question
A. First Body paragraph theme will be
B. Second Body paragraph theme
C. Third Body Paragraph theme
D. Fourth Body Paragraph Theme

II. Second Sub Question a Section Question
A. First Body paragraph theme
B. Second Body paragraph theme
C. Third Body Paragraph theme

III. Third Sub Question a Section Question
A. First Body paragraph theme
B. Second Body paragraph theme
C. Third Body Paragraph theme
D. Fourth Body Paragraph theme


I HAVE ATTACHED AN EXAMPLE OF WHAT THIS OUTLINE SHOULD FOLLOW.