Ow Dose Gap-Year Changes High-school Graduates

I have written 6 pages and there are comments from my instructor. The paper should be adding 2 more pages (total is 8 pages).

instruction:
1. follow what my instructor written on the paper
2. break 2nd paragraph in to several paragraph and add a subtitle for it(the subtitle could be: benefits of gap-year)
3. break 3rd paragraph in to several paragraph and add a subtitle for it(the subtitle could be: drawback of gap-year)
4. add a subtitle for the 4th paragraph, you can also break it into several paragraph(option).
5. add 3 more references(citation) to the paper. (you can choose the resource from what I uploaded or you can search it)

This is a research paper, topic is about gap-year
the structor of paper is:
1: intro.
2: benefits of gap-year
3: drawback of gap-year
4: gap-year is a good choice for students, but the way to avoid the side effect is to have a well plan in advance (this is the most important part)
5: conclusion

Ow Dose Gap-Year Changes High-school Graduates

I have written some part of essay: Introduction(completed), body 1(not complete, should be adding more sentences), body 2(not complete, should be adding more sentences), body 3(not complete, should be adding more sentences), conclusion(completed, but should be revised).

For each paragraph: body 1 is talking about benefits of gap year; body 2 is about the cons of gap year; body 3 is analyzing the pros and cons and give the solution that, gap year is good, but should be well-planned. (this is also the thesis statement of the whole paper)

you should use every article I uploaded as citation and along with references page