Ow employee engagement brings benefits to a company?
I would like to inform you that this dissertation topic has already been revised by my tutors and they said that I need to narrow down my dissertation topic. Which I would like you to narrow down and come up with suitable and proper dissertation topic. PLEASE FOLLOW THESE INSTRUCTION CAREFULLY!!!
Survey&Questionnaire are very crucial for the primary data for this dissertation. Therefore, please provide legit questionnaires and surveys to this dissertation.
I will upload my submitted version that I have already submitted and also I will upload all the requirements and assesments. This is the requirement from my university, therefore, I would like you to include and cover all the requirements.
Here are the comments and feedbacks from the tutors: (PLEASE NOTE THAT ALL THESE COMMENTS AND FEEDBACKS IS VERY VITAL , SO PLEASE READ THEM CAREFULLY AND FIX ALL THE MISSING PARTS THAT THE TEACHER ADVISED)
Introduction and Research Question(3/10)
-This is an interesting research topic that also provides some essential background of environmental policies and innovation. The outline offers some good insights into the problematic at hand however the intro and literature overview concentrate too much on context rather than subject matter. The research topic and question are clearly defined but are rather generic:
How employee engagement brings benefits to a company?
*How can employee engagement impact on the organization?
*What are the criteria and factors that leads to appropriate approaches to employee engagement?
You need to clearly identify which industry and which company you are planning to study. I understood that it may be Wells Fargo but you do not directly mention in the text. You need to clearly state who, when, why, and how you plan to study.
Literature awareness (8/10)
-You show good awareness of literature which could be expanded in relevance with your research as you start collecting data i.e. it has to be more industry/company specific. It needs to be more focused as now it is rather generic. Wells Fargo section is a good example of how you can adjust the rest of the text.
Coherence and logic between sections of outline(5/10)
-Largely descriptive and needs to be restructured and sections need to be more balanced i.e. now its more intro and context and little on finding and analysis or methodology.
-The methodology section shows more intention than method and needs improvement on context and style alike. There is good potential in this section but it needs to be made more academic and precise.
-There are no conclusions or findings identifies as a separate section. There are some however scattered across the text that need to be brought together and summarized.