Ow Fast Food Nation has chancged MY personal eating and shopping habits and WHY

This is a previous order that was royally screwed up by the first writer. My teacher has given me specific instructions to 1. use simpler terms, as some of the language used within the paper doesnt make sense. Get rid of run on sentences, a sentence should carry only one idea, not multiple. Back up all claims and statements with supporting evidence whether cited or personal. Make the topics less broad and ideas more clear. The original paper was supposed to be college level and it does not look it. Alot of the evidence is not cited, nor example given for statements.