Pplying Traditional Architecture Approaches To Contemporary Space Design,Creating New From Old

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I wrote my dissertation proposal 1200 words and my tutoras gave me feedback for my dissertation proposal. And I send you my dissertation also my tutoras report. I would like to tell, if is possible for you can you will write for me new Dissertation proposal by taking samples or similar from my old dissertation or if can you use the information from my old dissertation proposal. Also I have showed my teacher feedback with yellow colour in my dissertation proposal draft. In addition to it is possible for can you put relevant images with my dissertation.

Pplying Traditional Architecture Approaches To Contemporary Space Design,Creating New From Old

I am not sure how much actually needs to be rewritten and with the customer advice I added 4 pages after you take a look at please let me know If I need to add more pages or not.

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The essay which I want to edit is have written before by one of this essay sevice writer. I am planning to publish this essay on maggazine and I have gotten some critics from my Tutor . I removed some parts from the original one(number 1 attached file is the original), I shoved remove part with yellow mark on the text..I am sending the original one in case you need information..and also I have send the final essay which I want to edit on it( the file name: with tutor critics), I have already written my tutors critics on the text with comment diagram. when you open the files you can see all details.