Radicating Illiteracy in Primary School

INSTRUCTIONS:
Here is a documented essay i wrote an i want you to rewrite it or add more information on to it because I need my documented essay to be 1200 words an its not. I need a good english writer to do two type of work for me edit the information and add additionally information. I will send th file to youso you can read it and see if i need more correction to it.