Raft Outline for Final Paper Childhood Obesity Idea: Providing counseling in the schools for children

Assignment is to create a post-draft of the outline I just submitted (attached). Draft needs work not enough material and my 3 major supporting points need to be pointed out. 1. Medical set backs. 2. Emotional/Pyschological Problems 3. Becoming Obese Adults Thesis needs to be tightend up. Thesis statement is why we should provide counseling in the schools for children with Obesity. Overall paper needs work. A draft needs to be submitted from what I have attached and create a draft version of a presentation to help the message behind your big idea reach an audience who can take action or be influenced by the information. I am assuming a powerpoint slide presentation with animation or something to get my point accross and get the audiences attention.