Re dietary saturated fats associated with cardiovascular disease?

i have received feedback from supervisor for previous work and i would like a revision based on feedback comments

Added on 17.02.2015 16:46
Please find in attached files the previous work with feedback comment from supervisor. Please check that you can see all the comments (speech bubbles, yellow highlighted lines and red scored out lines) by clicking and hovering your mouse over them. Please contact me if any queries!

Added on 17.02.2015 18:17
Ps. please note that you will have to download the pdf file to be able to view the comments as you cannot view this online. the 1st comment is place right from the 1st page of the paper (the most important comment). i await response that you can confirm this.

Re dietary saturated fats associated with cardiovascular disease?

Project Title
Are dietary saturated fats associated with cardiovascular disease?

Project type
Critical literature analysis

Project outline
Dietary guidelines in both the UK and USA have for many years advocated strict limits in the amount of saturated fat in the diet, based upon research in the 1950s which suggested a strong link between dietary saturated fat and the risk of cardiovascular disease. A recent study (Chowdhury et al. 2014) has questioned this orthodoxy, coming to the conclusion that convincing evidence for a relationship between saturated fat and cardiovascular disease is lacking. This paper has created a significant amount of controversy with some critics finding fault with the authorsi?? methods and many media reports claiming that saturated fat was i??no longer bad for your hearti?? and in some cases beneficial.

Project aim
The aim of this project is to locate and evaluate what evidence exists in the medical literature for a relationship between saturated fat and cardiovascular disease and to determine whether the new findings justify changes to existing dietary guidelines and what those changes ought to be.

References
Schwab U, Lauritzen L, Tholstrup T, Haldorssoni T, Riserus U, Uusitupa M, Becker W. (2014) Effect of the amount and type of dietary fat on cardiometabolic risk factors and risk of developing type 2 diabetes, cardiovascular diseases, and cancer: a systematic review. Food Nutr Res. 10;58. Ann Intern Med. 2014 Mar 18;160(6):398-406. doi: 10.7326/M13-1788.

Chowdhury R, Warnakula S, Kunutsor S, Crowe F, Ward HA, Johnson L, Franco OH, Butterworth AS, Forouhi NG, Thompson SG, Khaw KT, Mozaffarian D, Danesh J, Di Angelantonio E. (2014) Association of dietary, circulating, and supplement fatty acids with coronary risk: a systematic review and meta-analysis. Ann Intern Med. 160(6):398-406.

Added on 15.01.2015 06:49
hi there, thanks for choosing to help with the writing of my dissertation. prior to contacting your company for the help, i had already started with the dissertation which was the literature review/introduction and submitted to my supervisor. i have received a feedback from the supervisor which i would like to also share with you for you to use as a guideline in writing the full report. so in attached files, you will find a copy of the literature review/ introduction i submitted with feedback from my supervisor, a copy of the topic again, and a copy of the course general guidelines for writing an honours thesis aswell as the grading guidelines and the thesis structure and content! the course guidelines should be strictly adhere to as this is what is expected by my supervisor.

Added on 20.01.2015 08:15
hi, i have now had the chance to view the work! thanks very much it is perfect and exactly what i was hoping for! but the only thing missing is the abstract section of the thesis! i will appreciate if you can have a look at this and upload another copy with the abstract section which will obviously rearrange the table of content. other than that this is a great job! i have included in the attachment instructions of the thesis structure and content and an instruction of what should be in the abstract section.

also i will appreciate if you are available for revision (if need be) after submission and feedback from the supervisor! i know that might be a new order which is ok by me

i await the new file with the addition of the abstract section to this work.

kind regards