Riminal Justice Studies: Why young people in the uk get drawn into gangs.

subject: BA Applied Criminal Justice Studies.
dissertation title:
Why young people in the UK get drawn into gangs.
please can you elaborate on the essay title so that it is acceptable and more of a dissertation title.

I will add all the information
also please can you use united KINGDOM data and use UK ENGLISH PLEASE AND UK DATA.

Added on 04.02.2015 09:41
I have attached the relevant documents.
please read through all attached files and especially the dissertation proposal and the feed back that is given and use that. also please can you ellabortae on the dissertation question so it is more professional and acceptable and answer according to that.
also please UK ENGLISH ONLY.

I WILL ATTACH RELEVANT READING BOOKS
THANX