RITICAL APPRAISAL OF A QUALITATIVE JOURNAL ARTICLE

THIS IS MY REFERRAL ESSAY. THE FEEDBACK I HAVE GOT ON THE PREVIOUS ONE WAS: ( LIMITTED CONTENT/KNOLEGDE, LIMITTED EVIDENCE OF DISCUSSION. TOO DESCRIPTIVE.
THIS ESSAY HAS TO HAVE LOTS OF DISCUSSION, WILLBE ATTACHING AND SENDING EXAMPLES OF OTHER ESSAYS,TO HAVE A LOOK AT, I WILL ALSO BE SENDING THE ESSAY GUIDELINE WITH THE JOURNAL THAT SHOULD BE CRITIQUED.